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Editorial audit of drafts and revisions (internal)

Utah House of Representatives · January 17, 2005
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Summary

Internal audit of initial draft articles; listed and resolved minor clarity and provenance issues, corrected speaker name normalization and ensured claims were attributed to the speaker who made them in the transcript.

An internal editorial audit was performed on the draft articles to check spelling, chronology, attribution, framing, and omission issues. Corrections made in the final revision include: standardizing the spelling of Phyllis Caroon as presented in the transcript, attributing historical claims and quotations only to speakers who raised them (primarily Darius Gray and Phyllis Caroon), and ensuring procedural actions were described as voice votes with no roll-call tallies. No substantive facts were added beyond the transcript.