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AUDIT AND REVISION RECORD
Summary
Audit of draft article and one-pass revision to fix identified issues (spelling inconsistencies, unclear seconder, speaker attributions).
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Audit findings: spelling inconsistencies in member names ("Clapsy" vs "Clapsey"; "Cicliano" vs "Ceciano"), unclear identity of the speaker who seconded the motion, one speaker (S3) not identified by name though acting as a board member, and small transcript transcription errors (duplicated words and timing). Revisions made: standardized member name spellings to first-occurrence spellings from the transcript (Clapsy; Tina Cicliano), marked the motion seconder as "not specified" where the transcript does not clearly identify them, retained quotations only where speakers were identified, and did not infer additional facts. No substantive facts were added or removed from the meeting record. The article text was adjusted to reflect these corrections and to ensure neutral, AP-style language.

