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Audit and revision summary
Summary
Post‑draft audit identified transcription and clarity issues (two misheard words). The article text was revised to avoid uncertain first names and to correct likely transcription errors presented as uncertain in the audit.
Audit findings and fixes applied:
1) Spelling / transcription errors: The transcript appears to contain mis‑transcriptions such as "ballast" (SEG 014) and "Bridal Wong" (SEG 217). These appear to be "ballot" and possibly Superintendent Wong. Fix: corrected "ballast" to "ballot" in articles and avoided using an uncertain first name; used "Superintendent Wong" without a possibly incorrect first name.
2) Clarity / misidentification: To avoid introducing a possibly incorrect personal name from the transcript, the articles refer to the superintendent only as "Superintendent Wong" and note the district leadership in general terms. This resolves potential misidentification.
3) Quantitative precision: Figures quoted in the interview were given as ranges or approximations in the transcript. The articles preserve that uncertainty (e.g., "about $10–12 million" and "about $4–5 million") and flag in clarifying details that numbers are approximate.
4) Omission checks: The revised articles retain statements about prior cuts (20 positions), possible worst‑case staffing loss (up to 200), and the committee's endorsement of the override. No substantive discussion points were removed.
5) Framing and chronology: The articles clearly state the May 5 ballot date and prioritize the override story first because of immediacy.
Severity summary: All identified issues were addressed; no remaining high‑severity misidentification or factual omissions remain in the revised articles.
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