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Audit: article set reviewed for clarity and accuracy
Summary
Internal audit of the drafts against spelling, clarity, chronology, framing, misidentification, context, omissions, and other issue categories. Lists found issues and recommended fixes; all were addressed in final revision.
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I reviewed the three draft articles (phishing/fraud response; referendum planning; food-service audit) against the Issues Rules checklist (spelling, clarity, chronology, framing, misinformation, misidentification, out_of_context, quantitative precision, process clarity, context clarity, agency clarity, question emphasis, omission, bias, duplicate).
Findings (summary): - Spelling/Names: No major misspellings of named entities; normalized “Southern Door County School District.” - Clarity/Chronology: All articles maintain meeting order and separate agenda vs. public comment; clarified statutory deadlines and factual dates mentioned in the transcript. - Misidentification: Minor ambiguity exists in mapping transcript speaker numeric labels to named roll-call speakers. I flagged this for transparency and used only explicit name occurrences for attributions; where numeric-to-name mapping was unclear, the article uses functional labels (e.g., "Superintendent," "staff member"). - Quantitative precision: Where dollar amounts or per-pupil estimates appeared in the transcript (e.g., $2,200 per pupil, $71,000 adjustment), I reported the values and noted when they were illustrative or approximate. Where the transcript did not supply exact recovered-loss amounts or deductible totals, the articles state "not specified" or "minus the deductible." - Omission: Ensured the board’s roll-call votes, the corrected Act 118 figure and the July 23 workshop scheduling appear in the governance article; program pause for milk and the $71,000 adjustment are in the food-service article.
Severity: Issues were low-to-medium; none required removal of articles. Revisions made in final text addressed the minor mapping ambiguity, made monetary/temporal uncertainties explicit, and added precise provenance links to transcript segments.

