Audit of initial draft

Spelling, clarity and identification issues found in the initial draft were addressed in the revision. Key findings: the transcript contains typographical errors ("COMMMISSION") and a name inconsistency (John Gracie vs John Gracey). The draft corrected the commission name to the authoritative spelling and standardized the commenter as John Gracie per the first transcript occurrence. No substantive facts were added beyond the transcript. The article avoids implying that police involvement was decided; it reports that police were discussed as a possible partner and that public commenters opposed police presence.

Actions taken: corrected commission name spelling; chose one consistent spelling for the commenter (John Gracie) and flagged the transcript inconsistency in the audit; explicitly noted that no formal decision on police involvement was taken.