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Audit and revision notes
Summary
Compliance audit of draft article against transcript and style requirements; issues found and corrected in final revision.
Audit categories checked: spelling, clarity, chronology, framing, misinformation, misidentification, out_of_context, Quantitative precision, Process clarity, Context clarity, Agency clarity, Question emphasis, omission, bias, duplicate.
Findings and fixes implemented in the revised article: 1) Avoided inventing individual yes-voters when not explicitly listed: minutes approval is described as 'carried 3-0 with two abstentions' rather than assigning yes votes to specific named supervisors beyond motion/second; 2) Noted missing cost amount for law review attendance as 'not specified' rather than estimating; 3) Recorded adjournment motion but did not assert a recorded vote where the transcript did not provide one; 4) Preserved verbatim audit claim amounts from the transcript; 5) Ensured all attributions map to the speaker list and used official role titles on first reference.
No additional substantive corrections were required after these changes.
